Eternal Love Poem by Nitya Pillai

Eternal Love

Rating: 5.0


The love in my heart for you
is simply uncontrolled
it wants you in my arms right now
for a last time to hold.
Just to see the look in your eyes
that in my eyes shows
and to tell you of the love
which only my heart knows.
If you could only read my mind
and tell me deep there the imprinted name
I would give up a thousand lives
to hope someday you feel the same.
A shiver runs through my soul
as a whiff of air touches you to reach me
just love me once in this lifetime
i'll anyway love you until eternity...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A B 06 October 2012

wah wah wah gud 1 indeed..particularly the last 2 lines

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

intense love expressed finely........10

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Kunal Seth 04 January 2007

its a sin to love someone for eternity.......by far the best piece written! !

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GreenEyes- Amor 04 January 2007

really its very nice Just to see thee look in your eyes that in my eyes shows and to tell you of the love which only my heart knows. If you could only read my mind and tell me deep there the imprinted name

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Nitya Pillai

Nitya Pillai

India...now living in Dubai
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