Eternal Love Poem by Andreanna Atkins

Eternal Love

Rating: 4.5


I'd still say that I love you,
Even if I could not talk.
And I'd follow you to the end of the earth,
Even if I could not walk.

I'd still see you as you as my king,
Even if I went blind.
And even though I searched and searched,
A love like this I could not find.

I'd still hear you out,
Even if I had no ears.
My heart still cries out at night,
Even though it's left no tears.

And even if my arms fell off,
I'd still hold you, close to my heart.
And even if my heart stops beating,
My love for you shall never part.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joe Fond 11 February 2010

I felt like you spilled your heart out onto the screen and thats what makes it so wonderful.

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Ency Bearis 21 November 2009

lovely...full of compassion and true love write.....great poem....10

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george george 21 November 2009

Nice piece, Andreanna. I can relate to that kind of tenacious love that never goes away!

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Andreanna Atkins

Andreanna Atkins

New Orleans, Louisiana
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