asef fakih

Rookie - 0 Points (28/10/1988 / Dhaka, Bangladesh)

Eternity And Beyond - Poem by asef fakih

If I believed in no end of eternity
If I believed in the flaws of integrity,
will my angels be confused?
Will my poems be refused?
Will my hate be reduced? ?
Can I believe in fate?
When I see my face in the mirror
it opens a gate
and to my astonished horror
I find god bemused
at my intentions to find myself
feelings abused
still unabashed
the search goes on
as the light falls upon
the judgment day.


Comments about Eternity And Beyond by asef fakih

  • james Xane (10/24/2008 7:16:00 AM)

    Deep introspection into life. Good work. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/16/2008 10:05:00 AM)

    thoughtful composition Asef. I am giving u 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Karima Astrid PKarima Astrid P (10/15/2008 9:24:00 PM)

    nicely penned poem you got there....well done (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 13, 2008



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