Even Praying. Poem by Jake Savage

Even Praying.



Beneath the glaring, scaring clouds; raining.
The Germans and British, both paining.
On the frontline, stuck serving.
I was stuck saying; even praying.

In the Somme; a mate, a pal, a friend; gone,
A single blast, a sound, the shot of a gun.
Lifeless he stayed there laying.
I was stuck saying; even praying.

The long shrill whistle, rang through the air.
I could run away, I wouldn't care.
I found myself; climbing, leaping and swaying.
I was stuck saying; even praying.

In the Somme; a mate, a pal, a friend; gone.
A single blast, a sound, the shot of a gun.
Lifeless I stayed there laying.
I was stuck saying; even praying.

A bright light; the end of the tunnel.
Gone is the sound of exploding shrapnel.
The smell of bodies; the taste of fear.
Rough heavy jacket, no longer are these things near.

I was stuck saying; even praying.

Saturday, June 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to Private Hugh Savage, Durham Light Infantry 15th Battalion. He wen missing in action during the year 1917.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jake Savage 07 June 2014

A very moving and emotional piece dedicated to a lost soul so very many years ago. A beautifully written poem of remembrance. and Hmm that felt so deep and touching. Its not the easiest thing to lose someone you love, moreso not to have the slightest idea where they end up. Thanks so much, being only 15 I still have a lot to learn but these comments mean so much to me! Thanks :)

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Colleen Courtney 07 June 2014

A very moving and emotional piece dedicated to a lost soul so very many years ago. A beautifully written poem of remembrance.

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Gold Trybes 07 June 2014

Hmm that felt so deep and touching. Its not the easiest thing to lose someone you love, moreso not to have the slightest idea where they end up.

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