Evening Poem by Sasho Ognenovski

Evening

Rating: 4.0


was sitting and meditating
Flicking in her darkness.
I loved her so much.
She was looking to me limpid and treacherous.
For the first time I wanted
My eyes not to see the light.
Beautiful evening.
She is crying,
Her stars are paling,
And I am,
Meditating about my steps
Toward the misty future
Remaining the only witness of her
Dying
And the damned rising of the lightness
Which has brought to me the mist
And the recovering consciousness,
The reality.

I remained alone, real,
Blind…

Thursday, July 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 30 January 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very passionate with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Nate Tulay 31 July 2017

Great piece, I love the ending. It forces you to read the poem again from a different prospective.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 July 2017

Great moment to meditate in the evening.... RATED 10+++++

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