Thursday, October 1, 2015

Everlasting Sunlight Comments

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It's a quite simple thought,
I'm sure you'll agree,
That we're all made of energy,
Just read this and see,
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Bob Hair
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Curtis Johnson 02 October 2015

You made your point very well about everlasting life. You also express how useful we are made by the energy we receive. How important therefore it must be that we utilize to the fullest the lives that we know as we live. Through love, we give our lives to others for their very need and sometimes their survival.

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Kelly Kurt 01 October 2015

Yes, the conservation of energy. However, in an expanding universe, eventually the energy will be so far spread out, that it will be a cold and dark place. (Thousands of trillions of years from now) I like the rhyme scheme and the positivity of this piece, Bob. Thanks

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