Everything Ends Now? Comments

wow! idk wat to say about this poem. its amazing. how do you put your feelings into words? how deep to u go until you feel its rite?

This is a very intense poem. It always amazes me how ones can breath so much life into words.

I felt very connected to this poem for various personal reasons and found it very moving. You can portray your emotions in a very forward way which I like

Exceedingly intense and honest as only youth can be. I remember it well. Hope it works out in the end Y and A.

well this is a poem that captures the pain of being in love.n love when u know that u are tuly in it, whereas the other person never will realise wat ur going through...it sure captures the brutal reality of unrepaid love wherin the other person will nver realise it..till ur very end..lovely work...

Cool poemo Amanda All the best and with a record deal soon Roger

once and again, another mind blowing poem of urs, such beautiful work, very deep and i love the repetition from the first versus with that last sentence. the story behind ur 'rhythm of words' reminds me of the something that happened to me, personally, u truly capture the essence of lovin sumone with all being and for that, the feeling of bein cursed by lovers disregard, love this poem, the pain is so beautiful, interesting how pain is quite as simple, but loathed to be experienced. im might sound older but im just 14, so i hope u dont get that its sum elder respondin, lol anywayz u rock and yea...have u heard of incubus? lol bye hun

i really like this poem