Thursday, April 30, 2009

Everything That Is What It Is Comments

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You run,
as though I am holding a gun.
Why are you so scared of me?
aren't I good enough for you to see?
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Tessa Marsland Pettigrove
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Emily Oldham 12 July 2012

Some nice lines here. Keep writing :)

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rago rago 30 April 2009

Thank u for your kind sharing.......the stanza i want to make things right, and not start the fight, all i want is for you to realise how much that you mean to me, because baby i know what we can be......still i love you.......very very nice. 10+++

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