for the preceding
commentaries
and the ensuing banter
dealing with birds
and bees
my head is spinning
from imbibing
too much flower spirits
and therefore so would
my comments
were I to offer any.
I can't make head
or tail
of your first stanza
bee-lining
into the second.
So I better shut up
and show
how your poem
inspired mine
as writ above.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem