Saturday, December 8, 2018

Excuse Me Please Comments

Rating: 5.0

Excuse me please while I indulge
naughtiness born of lust
a restlessness I'll cater to
revel in full latitude
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Sean Green
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Bri Edwards 04 February 2020

stanza 4: i think " prudish" i wonder what " judgment's tongue" means derivation? " the obtaining or developing of something from a source or origin" " the crowd convenes to play in carefulness" orgy time? ? convention: " a way in which something is usually done, especially within a particular area or activity" Yes, maybe not Bible Belt stuff. But? bri :)

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Chris Noir 08 December 2018

A mighty fine outlook, and a good poem, articulated to a fault yet beaming with condescending and cynical ire. needless to say 10/10

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Sean Green 08 December 2018

Wow. Thank you! Human nature still surprises me, mostly with delight.

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