Saturday, March 28, 2009

Excuse Me Sir Comments

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Taking a look in the mirror
Nothing seems to be clear.
Everything is a blur.
Excuse me sir.
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Maggie lll
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Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

A work of literary art in each stanza, this reads intense and beautiful throughout touching a myriad of places and emotions within. Metered perfectly as always. Nice work, Mag Love and light

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Brenda Tamayo 30 March 2009

This is so nice and witty topped with a good moral.

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