Exhilaration Poem by Star Dust

Star Dust

Star Dust

Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
Star Dust
Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)

Exhilaration

Rating: 5.0


Twisting, flying,
Across the planes,
Across the land of stars,
Tilting to the right,
Swinging to the left,
Above the surface we flutter,
In and out,
Without breath,
But no need,
Caught under with the living,
To see the blinding shapes,
In squares of character,
Laughing with exhilaration,

Playful pushing,
To see who gets the window,
But the blurry sight,
Could never be caught,
Caught up in an image,
Or on filmy paper,
Smiling at each other,
We understand,
This is what we’re here for,
Laughing, loving,
Just living,
Enjoying the company of the others,
In this voyage of exhilaration.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

great job great read

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Chocolate Bunny 02 November 2008

I really like this one. So much imagery thrown at you. This was a good read.

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