Friday, November 13, 2015

Expectant Ducky Comments

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You remember that attractive duck on the other side of the lake?
Well, you went for him like a hungry snake!
You fluffed your feathers and called him out,
And watched how quick he turned around.
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Gloraly Gomez
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Jeffrey Mitchell 13 November 2015

nicely worded I like the way you used the duck in your poem

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