Tell me which fight do you fight deep in you
My body shakes in waves of pain you feel
I see your fear is too dark to look through
No moon can help when I want you to heal
I say no words for fear that they can’t help
While seeds on fire burn the future wood
Though all I wish for is to make walls melt
While cries in silence doubt what I found good
Please trust me for just that I just trust you
Please fight the fear and show to me your face
There is this world but you and I are too
Don't be a rose hidén behind a vase
Oh please be brave to speak to me now true
Whatever happens I will still love you
You write, truly, beautifully, and with a great passion. This is defenitly one of my favourite poems. Keep writing! -C.Candea
that soo nice i love it alooot.. really i like ur style hope u the best
wow, i like it a lot i try to be that same person you are talking about and others do that for me! ! ! very touching
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sui generis; A unique poem! I liked the sucessive imagery brought like a short soundless movie slowly flashing in front of me, where my eyes understand it all to explain to my other senses. I liked quite a few lines in the poem, and the title, oh, its a beautiful title. 'Silent Fire'- No cackling, but its strength is nonetheless strong. Beautiful imagery that strikes like a bullet; in a second. Then, one favourite line would be, 'Tell me which fight do you fight deep in you' The simple words make the line so straight and wide that the feeling presented is of a great magnitude. Soft but strong, its a gorgeous line. This poem... makes me feeling like writing one in response...Would you mind if I did?