Fade Into The Black Poem by nataly gonzalez

Fade Into The Black

Rating: 5.0


I feel felt out, like I didn’t belong anymore
I did get mad, just feels like, I don’t know anything anymore
But I’m not new here. I been down here before.
I’m different now, I guess its just a feeling I have to get over of.
I feel like am trap in a whole were I cant call for help
For fear of what they might think.
But I'm free, free to run,
But what is freedom?
Or maybe its just a word to say.
Does anybody now I just wanted to get notice.
Now its too late
I fell too hard and couldn’t cry out for help.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 09 February 2009

Such a touching piece, every line can be felt, nicely penned and heart written. Jon.

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Joseph Poewhit 09 February 2009

You caught that feeling well of hopelessness

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