Failed Meeting Poem by Paul Flanagan

Failed Meeting

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There you are a beacon of happiness; Here I am, overwhelmed.
Drowning in the warm glow of the sun we walk toward each other.
Through the glistening grass and under the sea blue sky
Happiness is only moments away once again,

Unsure if you can see me I call your name,
Louder I repeat the call this time; I can't let this opportunity slide away.
You look up smiling recognising my call but nothing changes.
The distance stops fading; the sky turns grey

I can hear it coming, the train of darkness racing along its tracks.
Twisting, turning trying desperately to escape its impossible grasp.
Suddenly it grips me, roaring victoriously once again.
Silence surrounds me now, everything a fading memory
A tear stained pillow remains the only clue.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a poem about the meeting of deceased loved ones in dreams and the associated disappointing feeling when you wake up.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 06 June 2013

an excellent write. please post more so we can continue to enjoy your words.

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Bev Haigh 12 November 2012

this poem brought tears to my eyes, very profound, well done

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