Fake... Poem by Aubriel Hunt

Fake...



Your so fake, its realy pathetic, your so fake, ill call you a medic. Faker than barbie or pinnochio. please get real cuz ur being so low! smack a daughter in the place, slam a door in her face. actin like u care about ur own human race! thats what makes you fake. and im the only one real. how bout you try it and tell me how you feel, but you cant ur unconcious tryin to control me but i kno whos really real which 1 of you could that b? at timesits her and at times its him u guys r the same u both make everythinng dim. and im so cold but a blanket wont help. ill always be the real one oh wait i hear a bell, its ur puppetmaster calling you askin what you had to do to put my thru strife... N good job! Youve SUCCEEDED! AND destroyed my life!

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Angelic Warrior 08 July 2009

so very raw.....so sad.....its like screaming on 'paper'.......a write with depth.....i like your comparisons..... just so sad: (......no one should feel that....: (

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