Friday, October 23, 2015

Fake Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

IT WAS YOU WHO GAVE ME A REASON TO LIVE.
IT WAS YOU WHO INSPIRED ME TO MOVE AHEAD.
IT WAS YOU WHO TAUGHT ME TO TRUST.
IT WAS YOU WHO MADE MY LIFE WORTHY.
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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly - a voyage of bliss. It's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning. It is very important that one learns to take things in stride when love makes its exit. I like the conviction of the piece. A well articulated poem nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Mustafa. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Rajnish Manga 23 October 2015

First two stanzas of the poem paint the protagonist in a sublime shade but the last one belittles his stature- I WILL NOT LOVE YOU ANYMORE. May God give him strength to regain his poise. Thanks.

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