Thursday, November 13, 2008

Fallen Apart Comments

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I think i have fallen in love
but now i am fallen apart
your love takes me miles
but now puts me to a stop
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shyanne marielove
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 November 2008

The finest gift human could get...but your fallen apart now..hopin all's well for you next time around.nice piece.

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Billy Joe Collins 13 November 2008

well wrote sad poem don't fall apart move on thanks for sharing

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