Sunday, March 16, 2014

Fallen Petal Comments

Rating: 4.5

Laid alone in the dust a lily petal,
Broken and dejected from her family,
With no one to play or to battle,
She just murmered her honest plea,
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Aditya Raj Verma
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 September 2019

A beautiful lily blossomed that spring, And she was the part of that lovely ring, Too elegant and graceful in her deed Threw a alluring spell on a wild weed, very very poetic lines.. this is a meditation.. pride, humility. a tear for the flower.. tony

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Luo Zhihai 16 December 2014

This was a very short, sweet, an simple poem.

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Luo Zhihai 16 December 2014

Read the masterpiece! Greeting friend!

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Luo Zhihai 16 December 2014

Read the masterpiece! Greeting friend!

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Rajnish Manga 06 December 2014

This is a beautiful lyrical poem with a message. Its melodies linger on long after we have read the poem.

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