Fallen Petals Poem by Princy Prince

Fallen Petals

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Your kiss left me on the edge
And i remember those cold blue eyes
That left me in the dark pits

Waiting for a hug
The hug that made me warm
But seeing you stand there
Without saying a word
Made me feel that something is wrong

Then you took a step back
I could see the sadness in your eyes
Yoursmile had disappeared
And you said, "i am sorry"

It left me wondering, "why? "
Why was hesorry?
Why was he sad?
Did something happen?
What was wrong?

Standing in the cold winter gloom
Without saying anything
He started to part and walk away

I wanted to hold him
Say, "its gonna be okay"
But the silence he left me in
Could not say a word

He bowed his head down
And held himself
Taking a step or two
He said, "it was never supposed to be this way"

I could not blame him
Neither could i say, "what you did was fine"
Because seeing those sad blue eyes
Brought tears to my eyes

He started to walk away

The distance he brought
Made us a distance apart

We could never be together,
Like how rose petals can never be re-joined
Once they have been fallen

Thursday, July 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ONCE A ROSE PETAL IS FALLEN IT CANNOT BE RE- JOINED
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 19 July 2018

Emotional and dramatic. A powerful narrative leaves one speechless about the unpredictability of relationships in life. Great observation: rose petals can never be re-joined Once they have been fallen

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