Fallin' For You Poem by Victoria Ayres

Fallin' For You



Oh No, I think it's happening again
Dear Me, I swore I'd never let him in
Oh My, How can I be so unsure now
Come On, My new friend show me how
Teach me what I have to learn
To carry on with out concern
To let an evil past disappear
And let my feelings now be clear
Oh Sure, You wanna be a special guy
I'm Scared, And I think you know the reasons why
I'm Shy, How can you be so out there?
Help Me, I wanna breathe, I wanna share!
But how can something be so true
So alive and still so newI feel like I can trust you
And yet I just now met you
I'm falling faster than before
I can't take this anymore!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Owens 06 May 2010

I like the way the poem is organized without any line breaks, it gives the poem the feel of moving fast. You might want to make sure there aren't any mistakes like this one 'newI feel like I can trust you'. Good poem.

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