Scared Poem by Victoria Ayres

Scared

Rating: 4.5


You call me up and scream in vain
But i'm not the one who brought you pain
I didn't leave you stranded there
But then again she didn't care
But I really do, I'll have you know
You'll get it as the tears do flow
You'll catch them and begin to see
You did the same things to me
You didn't leave me, no you're here
You screamed at me, and brought me fear
I don't deserve all of her blame
Save it for her, I quit this game
Don't call me if you want to fight
That won't help us through the night
I love you babe, but understand
I'm not here to hold your hand
I'll guide you yes, and help you through
But all the work is left to you
Just promise me you'll let it go
And only niceties will show
At least warn me let me be prepared,
Because I truly hate becoming scared.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 06 November 2009

Nice flow to this poem and good storyline. Enjoyed the read, Just a little advice here, try to find other situationslike nature, places, events, humourous ideas to vary your writing, as it can get boring if all your poems are centred around love and passion. I know you are at that romantic age, but not everyone is and a good variety of storylines are always looked on with favour. No criticism meant here, I like your style. Love Ernestine XXX

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