Thursday, March 20, 2008

Falling... Comments

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Falling in and out of my happiness
People leaving…his moods changing
Our love has lost its magic…the magic only lasted a month
And now my magic touch is gone…
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Kasi Navadomskis
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Matthew Cole 03 December 2008

Wow very nice poem I liked it alot... +10 Love Matthew

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Howard Johnson 26 March 2008

The sparkle kind -a goes away, The little poem at the end should be submitted as its own, A few more lines on it would make it strong.

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