Falling Apart Comments

I hope the hurt goes away.. Thanks for sharing !

Vibrantly intense feelings throughout this poem, they grip the heart with every word written. Sometimes nothing we do will be enough for another, so we must give and take temporarily in hopes that in our future will be someone who will love us no matter what. Excellent poem! It's rhythm is impeccable as well as the rhyming. Love this one! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

Some people are meant to come in our life to give some memories and love and to take some memories and love...and same some are meant to go from our life...leaving something and taking something.....lovely poem...liked it...thank u for sharing :)