Saturday, January 6, 2007

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As love becomes hate, and the words become fake,
I love you is a hollow phase used in the wrong way,
Pain becomes stronger, heartbreaks seem longer,
The world becomes your maze, finding love becomes a crave,
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Matthew Brooks
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The poet known as kiibaati 08 January 2007

Another nice one, though I don't understand how a love affair can be such a matter of life and death.

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Patricia Gale 06 January 2007

Wow, you have hit deep emotions in this piece. well done

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