***fantasy World Poem by Shelby Renee

***fantasy World

Rating: 2.8


I wanna live in a world with no such thing as fear.
Where all people are honest and truly sincere
Where people don't hurt you.
There's not reason to cry
Where people don't just want to hurry up and die.

I wanna live in a world where everything is good.
Where everyone is so easily understood.
Where people don't go out and kill one another.
Where everyone treats you just like their own brother.

But such a world does not exist, as you well know
Some people will go to heaven, and other's down below
But you can't help but want to live in a world like this
It's an unstoppable thought that you just can't miss

Call me a dreamer, but other people have thought of this world too
At least in a fantasy world like this, people wouldn't feel so blue.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 03 July 2009

Wouldn't life just be so wonderful...if this fantasy one day became reality....we live in hope....you've written this so well my lovely....it touches beyond the heart...lovely piece to share...I believe we all want the same things.....great job

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Blue Eyes 10 April 2009

i really like this poem and wonder why noone has read it before.it is really nice.

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