Tuesday, June 3, 2008

Far Away Comments

Rating: 3.5

Your far away
To far for reach
Come again another day
You are with me
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Greenwolfe 1962 13 June 2008

I would like to know a lot more about this. There is much left unsaid. This is not a complicated message but it holds within it a sad and maybe a terrible truth. The writer prefers not to divulge it. This is painful for the reader. As one who values readers, It finds little favor with me Still, it is written clearly. That is its value. I give it a 7. GW62

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DaNa XxX 03 June 2008

it's really........really nice i like it ^_^

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