Far Way Land Poem by Sougata Majumder

Far Way Land

Rating: 5.0


I found a Song under the blue sky.
White clouds and blue sky wrote to me with their Blushy tune.
I searched them, when star shines at the North.
And the wind flows from the South.

I found a Song on the river bank.
The star never looked back.
My lover went beyond the Blue Sun.
And my music still waiting to find a gun.

Colors are shaded Gray.
Thoughts are finding the Bay.
Fly fly and fly away
Where is the Land of Far Way.

Wind comes to me
I sing the Song of Far Way Land.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 30 June 2010

Blue Sun….. [Metaphorically uncommon…bytes on blue moon are there but sun? ] ‘Music still waiting to find a gun.’ [Wow! Splendid] ‘I sing the Song of Far Way Land. [to make far near very near and nearest into breast…] Your psychic nib please lend me to write better …thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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