Sunday, May 11, 2008

Fatal Error For Friend Thad Comments

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The suicidal moths attack.
Small kami kazi volunteers,
There is no way to hold them back.
The moment that a light appears.
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Thad Wilk 11 May 2008

Thank you Ivor! I don't think they know that they will die, as into the burning light they fly An inborn trait they yearn for light, into any flame they'll fly each night, which makes me think moths aren't too bright? Great read! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Alison Cassidy 11 May 2008

Such a small subject. Such a huge implication. Your poem fascinates, as the moths that are so fascinated by the light. Clever penning. The irony becomes you. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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