Monday, December 21, 2009

Fatal Symphony Comments

Rating: ★5.0

A quite hum, the music looms
As the instruments begin to tune.
Our hands together, my bow on your strings,
I look in your eyes, and the symphony begins.
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Thunderstorm Lullaby
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Jean Dament 21 December 2009

I like how you wove the idea of a symphony playing with the love song in your life. Well done & enjoyable to read. 'a quite hum'-should be 'a quiet hum' ok Spiritsong

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Fred Babbin 21 December 2009

Well written. You sound young.

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Thunderstorm Lullaby

Thunderstorm Lullaby

Mansfield MA
Thunderstorm Lullaby
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