Father's Day Poem by Icy rivas

Father's Day

Rating: 5.0


he disapped
and the answers aren't so clear
he mayhave been old
but man was he bold
i rember him well
its as loud as ring a bell
oh how he talked so much
even if you spoke dutch
and he would do any favor
it didnt matter how much labor
oh father
how you loved to sing
you loved more than working
yes you was a great man
to describe you
i would need a marching band
and the only thing i want to say
is happy fathers day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2009

you loved more than working yes you was a great man to describe you i would need a marching band and the only thing i want to say is happy fathers day what a nice and kind feeling for father. this is how kids feel about hard working father and the way they have been brought up in adverse condition. I appriciate your feelings dear. father as important as mother. i liked it so much...10 it will be incomplete if u donot read....o, mother...papa do u knwo? & papa you too

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