Sunday, April 5, 2015

Fatty Lumpkin Comments

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Fatty Lumpkin’s growing old.
I noticed that this winter.
She lies beside the heaters, always cold.
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Nancy Nielson
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Chinedu Dike 06 April 2015

I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned to capture the beginning of the end of a cat well loved by a family. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 05 April 2015

A lovely style and a lovely poem. Thank you, Nancy.

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