Friday, June 1, 2018

Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

As darkness grows near, fear runs deep
I dread the dreams, as I sleep

My body tightens, breaths are shorter
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Dave Eadelis
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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2018

An insightful depiction of a bunch of sinister shadows that is fear, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with clarity of thought. Beautiful poem embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Dave.

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Kelly Kurt 01 June 2018

Stop that! But keep writing!

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