Fear Hides Vacent Eyes Comments

Ah! I love this poem! Besides the fact that it is extremely well written, I love the subject matter! A poem after my own heart! I'm a huge lover of anything creepy, spooky and paranormal. I'm not sure how I feel about the ending though. Although I totally agree with your poet's note of needing some light at the end I bet you could have come up with something really shocking and terrifying to close with! Great imagery created here!