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Thursday, September 11, 2008

Fearness

Rating: 5.0
Far away but seem closed
Night became more dark
Bird won't fly... winds won't make a wish
Scared...Fear
Heard so many fearness
Fear to fall, leaves hangs so tight
until Bird won't fly
Just waiting...
when can talking and flying together
when loves and cares spread again
just waiting with deep scar
when can together with wind make a wish
just silence and stayed with pain
Night with gloomy light
Cold but dry.....just like that
Bird is bowed and cry
Fee Chen
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COMMENTS
Ivan Donn Carswell 11 September 2008
this is an expressive poem which needs to be liberated. I'm not sure to whom or where I place the message but what you've written needs to edited to let the message flow free... Rgds, Ivan
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Tom Balch 11 September 2008
A well penned, deep and meaningful piece, well done Fee, regards Tom
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