Alpeshkumar Makvana

Freshman - 956 Points (29-03-1991. / Navagam)

Feel 1 - Poem by Alpeshkumar Makvana

It reminds me of the dam,
Where the Happy galloping waters clash;
In an ignorant effort to follow the impulse,
Surging within the heat of raining spring.
Year through numb
Rivulets, channels, streets, canals;and bloods
Catch at heating draw:
The roots of passion tree quench in this flow.

ATISH.

Topic(s) of this poem: feeling

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Comments about Feel 1 by Alpeshkumar Makvana

  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (6/13/2017 10:49:00 AM)

    ivulets, channels, streets, canals; and bloods
    catch at heating draw:

    then the roots of passion. very expressive.. fine poem. thank you. dear poet. tony
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 7, 2017

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 3, 2017


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