Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Feel Comments

Rating: 5.0

This immutable lifestyle that I deal with
Gets to me more and more everyday
Realizations of how my life is as I conceal my writhe
Depression gets the best of me
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Lissa P 01 April 2008

the text is good but try useing more spaceing It will make the read stop/slow down and the poem wont sound like one big sentence and be forgetable because once u get down to it it is really good

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jessie warren

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