Feel Me Poem by Sahar Ali

Feel Me



First glimpse was normal
Second came crush
Without my conscious
I found I was blind
Come let me see you
&hold you in my arms
Come let me take you
Make you for eternity mine.
How awful it feels to have a lonely heart
No person to care for
No one to hold tight
My eyes full of tears
My heart conquered by fears
Still I want to have you
Am surrendered to you
I want you to feel me
Just the way I feel you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jack Tex 28 March 2007

Way to go. enjoyed this one a lot.

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Hazem Al Jaber 03 February 2007

well dear suheir.. so lovely feelings came out from a great and pure heart, and wish you to get all what you hope to.. nice writing... wish to read more..

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GreenEyes- Amor 01 February 2007

very nice poem good luck

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 February 2007

nice poem, i hope you get the girl...

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