Feel Your Lips Poem by Katniss Everdeen

Feel Your Lips

Rating: 5.0


Sitting in my room
Tears dropping on the floor
As I wish on each and every tear
To feel your lips once more

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Tears are drooping on the ‘emotive-floor. So O’ Poet fuss not will be felt rhapsodically by lithe Lips…sure I’m… Nice stunning diction 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2010

A wish ´for the tear to fell the lips. nice short and fine and beautiful. thank you

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Rajinder Singh 31 January 2010

your poems are as lovely as you are

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Debasish Mishra 31 January 2010

Brief, beautiful..........and thoughtful! ! !

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