Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Feeling The Draught Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tom tiddle om, tiddle om tom tom.
The drummers played as they marched along,
close behind were the infantry.
they were smart as smart could be.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Tom J. Mariani 07 November 2007

This one had me splitting my sides. Who says poetry has to be all confessional gloom and doom? You are living prrof that it doesn't have to be so.

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Jennifer Perryman 05 November 2007

ivor, brilliant write..... Wonderful, Beautiful, Humor..... 'Enjoyed'.......

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Thad Wilk 23 October 2007

Good Humor Ivor! Great write! (10) ! ! Thad

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