persian khushi

Rookie - 120 Points (kashmir)

'Feeling Weak' - Poem by persian khushi

A mountain resting on my head
And an empty feeling in my belly
The thought of eating, nauseating
My body feeling weak...
The thought of eating
Makes me want to puke
I just want to get into bed
Curl up and lay to rest
The heat not helping much
Adding to this awful feeling
Ringing in my ear
As I feel the room spin
Then total darkness
Waking up in the someone's arms
A friend of a friend's in whose
Arms I found myself
Oh, that awful feeling in my head
I didn't care
I just fell asleep again.
Next morning concerned faces look at me
But my hero is not around.
I can't remember because I didn't his face


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24/01/13

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  • Ramesh Rai (7/8/2013 11:54:00 AM)


    optimism is the root of life. life is never to stop never to bend. it glows flows (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 21, 2013


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