Gopendra Kumar


Feelings - Poem by Gopendra Kumar

Feelings
Hold on to it and you will feel bad
Let it go and you will never be sad
I feel the kid in me was once dead
I feel I was feeling bad

You feel how feelings make you feel
You get so angry, feeling make you so sad
You feel so happy, the feeling make you so great
You feel the way the feelings feel the feel

Don't feel the feel and feeling will fade
Don't feel so bad as it's not so bad
Don't let the feeling a feel you mad
Don't let the feel make you so sad

Feel the feelings which make you feel great
Once you feel great you will never be sad
Feeling are feelings feel them feel a slave
Feelings are never been so great, Feelings will feel bad when you feel it bad

Topic(s) of this poem: feeling


Comments about Feelings by Gopendra Kumar

  • Robert Murray Smith (8/12/2017 11:57:00 PM)


    I have a feeling that there are too many feel and feelings in this poem. Overuse of words don't enhance readability. (Report) Reply

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (8/12/2017 11:24:00 PM)


    A nice poetic imagination, Gopendra. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/12/2017 9:55:00 PM)


    feel, how feeling makes you fill, very true (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 12, 2017

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 12, 2017


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