Fiction Poem by Cupid Missed

Fiction

Rating: 5.0


I am lonely now, as if i ever had a friend.
I am slowly raising my head, to see my life end.
I have no reason to lie, or to pretend.
For come what may, we cant swim out of this deepend.
I am growing stronger, but you are invicible,
i can see everything but you are invisible.
A diamond hour glass motionless without sand.
A golden clock without a single hand.
I have grown wings but you can fly,
and i realise everything in our life, it was a lie.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 20 March 2010

Superb poem with thoughtful words....10

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Nangula Immanuel 21 April 2009

WOW WOW WOW! ! i love this poem, the words are so powerful, the figures of speech so well used. It is beautifully written, just absolutely beautiful! I am adding this to my fav poem list!

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Emily Oldham 30 October 2008

this poem is so sad and so beautiful. inspiring and poignant. thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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