Fight Poem by NightShade Tenja

Fight

Rating: 4.0


In pain I fight
In love I try
For my friends to understand
They don't need to feel pain
I take it
Because I love them
I want them to understand
They shall not feel sorry for me
For in the pain and sorrow
I fell love and happy, complete
Because they saved me
They gave me love and happiness
And a reason to fight

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first poem, maybe I don't fully understand what a poem is but I will try.
I made this poem when I was asked why I work so hard on school.
I didn't know what to answer, I hadn't any plans for my future or anything to work up to.
I didn't get to answer the question when he's friends and him was in a hurry.
when I got home I couldn't get the question outta my head and began to write this.
Now I understand, I work hard because I don't want my friends to feel sorry for me, I don't want to give up.
I got a future even know I don't know what it brings, I will work up to it.
When im under hard press form homework, I know that im fighting, and it makes me happy, because then I know im doing something good.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2013

A good poem, a good note and a good bio. Welcome to PH with your first poem.

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