Cry of pain
was from
world of sorrows
The son wanted
to hug him
see him.
The wife wanted
to keep him
Still final goodbye
had to be done
The body was heavy
as the
soul has left.
The body had to be lighted
as the
soul has left.
The body was heavy as the soul has left... fine description with a great feeling of sadness.. and the soul body relationship at the end....... thankyou dear poet. tony
An extremely poignant account. Death leaves a void and a trail of sadness.
It's a very insightful piece of poetry! The last two stanzas made me analyze the powerful expression! Thanks for sharing.....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
" The body was heavy as the soul has left. " when a part of the whole has left, the rest should be lighter. But, though the fact remains what you said, the juxtaposing of facts makes poetry. Nice