Fire In Me Poem by Adam Iron Thorn

Fire In Me

Rating: 5.0


You put the fire in my soul,
And put my pen to this scroll.
With the fire of a thousand hearts,
The immense feelings start.
Lit up my dark life,
Before inserting your knife.
Using my heart as a place to tread,
Causing this gun upside my head.

Thursday, September 1, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,fire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 01 September 2011

Interesting rhyming scheme. Rhyming poems aren't my favourites, but this is very beautiful. I like your writing, and I hope to see more from you in the future.

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