Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Fireworks Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a definite chill in the night air,
As a veil of wood-smoke filled our Square.
In the air, its rich aroma hauntingly hung;
I inhaled deeply, drawing it in to my lungs.
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Angela Wybrow
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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 October 2015

Beautiful rhyme and wonderful narration. The poem carried with it happiness while feeling the running kids with glee. Enjoyed the poem very much. Thanks for sharing.10++ Ratnakar Mandlik

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Angela Wybrow

Angela Wybrow

Salisbury, Wilts, UK
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