Sunday, May 19, 2013

First Attempt At Writing 'Tetractys' Comments

Rating: 4.5

Moon
Descends
To my door
And grins at me
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indira babbellapati
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David Wood 21 May 2013

As poets we have to be very creative and you have been with this good poem.

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Shahzia Batool 19 May 2013

Creative attempt, and meaningful too, all about beats, balance in a measured manner...a thoughtful attempt! ! !

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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