First Date Poem by Dylan KD.

First Date

Rating: 5.0


you got your tongue to the frozen pole
stuck on that love fix
a lizard in fishnets
you shiver when broke

your body is endless
asleep while awake
undressing what covers
the temple, the grave

I know where your source is
it flies without ease
anxiety burdens
a soul with no bones

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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